Monday, March 10, 2014

Midpoint

intervalefoodhub.com
Outline:
  1. Introduction
  2. What is CSA
  3. CSA vs. traditional food distribution
  4. Connecting people to place
  5. Health benefits
  6. Economy benefits
  7. Environmental benefits
  8. Conclusion
seedleaf.com
intervalefoodhub.com
bonfirehealth.com
  • avoid passive voice (i.e. "Vermont has been a leader" --> "Vermont is a leader")
  • avoid prepositional phrases #atallcosts
  • avoid "it" and "its" -- define what "it" is
  • hook -- imagery of Burlington Farmers Market
  • use personal photos (Champlain Orchards, BTV Market) as well
  • thesis -- time, place, point
  • "more than" not "over" 65 farms